RE: CIS Alumni Activities
Heisey, Jennifer L
Sent: Wednesday, February 08, 2012 3:40 PM
To:
Lin, William; Santa Maria, Ramona
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Jennifer L. Heisey, M.Ed.
Director, Alumni Affairs
Buffalo State College
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From: Lin, William
Sent: Wednesday, February 08, 2012 2:56 PM
To: Heisey, Jennifer L; Santa Maria, Ramona
Subject: RE: CIS Alumni Activities
Wednesday, February 8, 2012
Assignment #4: Critical thinking #2
Student XCIS 105Dr. SantaMaria2/5/12
1. A game is “a competitive activity involving skill, chance, or endurance on the part of two or more persons who play according to a set of rules, usually for their own amusement or for that of spectators.”[RS1]
2. There is no rule that states women cannot play baseball. There has not been a woman who has the strength and skill of a man to compete in the major leagues[RS2] . If teams thought women could benefit the team they would probably [RS3] let them play.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yeti
3. Humans become very passionate because sports are entertaining. People love to watch a select group of human beings do remarkable [RSM4] things with their talents that the average human being cannot. People who fall in love [RSM5] with certain players are called fans[RSM6] . The reason fans usually fall in love [RSM7] with the players is because the players do things the fans wish they could.
4. A team is “a number of persons forming one of the sides in a game or contest.”[RSM8]
5. If the people in the seats, the fans, [RSM9] were to play against the players on the field, the players would dominate [RSM10] the fans. The players play the game for a living[RSM11] . They play, train, and practice every day, while the fans either just watch the sport or play on a much lower level of competition. [RSM12] Players of the game are much more skilled and talented[RSM13] ; they stand out compared to an average human being.
6. When it comes to playing a game, winning and losing is everything[RSM14] . Everybody wants to win and nobody wants to lose. [RSM15] The feeling you get from winning cannot be explained, [RSM16] while the feeling you get from losing is a feeling you never want to experience again[RSM17] . Winning shows that your talents are better than others and every human being wants to be the best at something. [RSM18]
[RS1]If this is a definition from someplace, where is the referemce?
[RS2]Really? Back this up with a reference that states this.
[RS3]If you have to answer “probably” then you should look up the answer to see if “probably” is “actually”.
[RSM4]What does remarkable mean in this sitation?
[RSM5]Explain…
[RSM6]Odd sentence.
[RSM7]Poor choice of words. Delete.
[RSM8]If this is a definition !.) give it a reference, 2. You need to relate it back to the question.
[RSM9]Just say the fans in their seats.
[RSM10]Physically? Emotionally? If so, how?
[RSM11]Instead write: as their job or profession”.
[RSM12]How does this refer back to the question?
[RSM13]Than who?
[RSM14]Instead write: “the object of the game”.
[RSM15]Why?
[RSM16]Then don’t write this sentence it here if you can’t explain it.
[RSM17]Odd. Delete.
[RSM18]Good, now relate it back to the question.
1. A game is “a competitive activity involving skill, chance, or endurance on the part of two or more persons who play according to a set of rules, usually for their own amusement or for that of spectators.”[RS1]
2. There is no rule that states women cannot play baseball. There has not been a woman who has the strength and skill of a man to compete in the major leagues[RS2] . If teams thought women could benefit the team they would probably [RS3] let them play.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yeti
3. Humans become very passionate because sports are entertaining. People love to watch a select group of human beings do remarkable [RSM4] things with their talents that the average human being cannot. People who fall in love [RSM5] with certain players are called fans[RSM6] . The reason fans usually fall in love [RSM7] with the players is because the players do things the fans wish they could.
4. A team is “a number of persons forming one of the sides in a game or contest.”[RSM8]
5. If the people in the seats, the fans, [RSM9] were to play against the players on the field, the players would dominate [RSM10] the fans. The players play the game for a living[RSM11] . They play, train, and practice every day, while the fans either just watch the sport or play on a much lower level of competition. [RSM12] Players of the game are much more skilled and talented[RSM13] ; they stand out compared to an average human being.
6. When it comes to playing a game, winning and losing is everything[RSM14] . Everybody wants to win and nobody wants to lose. [RSM15] The feeling you get from winning cannot be explained, [RSM16] while the feeling you get from losing is a feeling you never want to experience again[RSM17] . Winning shows that your talents are better than others and every human being wants to be the best at something. [RSM18]
[RS1]If this is a definition from someplace, where is the referemce?
[RS2]Really? Back this up with a reference that states this.
[RS3]If you have to answer “probably” then you should look up the answer to see if “probably” is “actually”.
[RSM4]What does remarkable mean in this sitation?
[RSM5]Explain…
[RSM6]Odd sentence.
[RSM7]Poor choice of words. Delete.
[RSM8]If this is a definition !.) give it a reference, 2. You need to relate it back to the question.
[RSM9]Just say the fans in their seats.
[RSM10]Physically? Emotionally? If so, how?
[RSM11]Instead write: as their job or profession”.
[RSM12]How does this refer back to the question?
[RSM13]Than who?
[RSM14]Instead write: “the object of the game”.
[RSM15]Why?
[RSM16]Then don’t write this sentence it here if you can’t explain it.
[RSM17]Odd. Delete.
[RSM18]Good, now relate it back to the question.
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